実質... (kokoro_kara) wrote in the_muses_lair,
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This is just a little poem I wrote. This isn't the style I usually write in, but just something I'm experimenting with.


Wearily looking out on night
Seeking the calm of starry sky
Finding in its stead endless void
Plunging me in deepest plight

Leaning forward against the frame
Cold hands on worn rocks resting
Peering closely at empty sky
Staring back with blood in its eyes

Gazing ahead at deepening red
Creeping sadness taking hold
For you succeeded where I failed
Leaving me alone now we have won

Turning away from the window
Seeking solace in warm dark
A single candle lending fragile light
Red tears falling from hollow eyes

Weary eyes before me behold
Sleek countenance robed in night
Pale features seeming not my own
Staring back with blood in its eyes

Deepest sadness clouds hollow eyes
For you succeeded where I failed
You are gone while I remain
But I'll see you again someday

We had done all that we could
And on you did the sky gaze
Mercy clear in deep cold eyes
Leaving me here in lonely dark

Turning yet away to face waiting night
Red tears falling from hollow eyes
To somehow succeed where I failed
Finding my way back to sweet embrace.

Um..yeah ^^ Comments greatly appreciated. Also, if you could tell me why you think it's called 'The Window'? I'm curious and have been getting a lot of interesting interpretations of that.

~Raven~
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